Dreamt of Flying....Dreamt of Life
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rancelandstrongOf course I like my own things.
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Dreamt of Flying....Dreamt of Life

by rancelandstrong

Somber Solem Alone in the nest Feathers rotting My aching heart Dies beneath my bloody breast Never got to fly Poor little me A soaring bird I never got to be.....

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rancelandstrongBronze CommaOf course I like my own things.
a year ago
I've never hated nor loved you more than this.
The sad end of a love lost.

rancelandstrongBronze CommaOf course I like my own things.
a year ago
im rances sister. this is my story. of life nuggets
this shit is amazing

rancelandstrongBronze CommaOf course I like my own things.
a year ago
Sonnet #2
My second sonnet. as explained by the title.



rancelandstrongBronze CommaOf course I like my own things.
a year agoReply
@pluto Thanks dawg! I appreciate it.

rancelandstrongBronze CommaOf course I like my own things.
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you! I'm glad that others can relate to my poems.

plutoSilver CommaPlanets man
a year agoReply
awww beautiful and moving

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was really well constructed and that always helps the message. The message is intensely moving. Even without the picture, I can see right into that nest and makes my heart bleed with the bird. You keep the basics and do not overwrite it which is excellent.