in a timeless moment
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rainpoets are just kids who didn't make it
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in a timeless moment

by rain

oh she promised that she would love me forever,

and g o d did she love me.

she said she wanted to live forever,

and i assumed that meant with me by her side,

but mortals aren't meant to fall in love with gods.

they don't stick around, forever.

they don't keep their promises, they outlive them.

she said she would love me forever, but little did i know, a god's forever is but a mortal second.

we are the beats of a fly's wing, the trails of sunset that disappear without our noticing.

she said forever, and it meant n o t h i n g .

eternity isn't real. there is only now.

and god, in the present, she loved me in the moment.

she loved me in an endless second and she didn't give up until the second hand clicked and forever became reality.

there is no infinity. there is only now, now and then.

an eternity and a forever of a past me and her.

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rainpoets are just kids who didn't make it
8 months agoReply
@staywiththemoon @tdog16 thank you so much for the amazing comments, i'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

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8 months agoReply
Wow that was very complex! Your message was well delivered in such a beautiful way! I could tell you put a lot of work and effort into this for it shows in your words...thank you for taking your time to create this beauty for me and other people to read! I truly enjoyed it!

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8 months agoReply
This is a beautifully worded poem! I love it!

rainpoets are just kids who didn't make it
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil @bookbee109 thank you! and that's pretty much what i was thinking about when writing this, bernard.

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8 months agoReply
This is a beautiful and baleful poem. It represents to me the ephemeral relationships of life. Rather than waste your time thinking about forever, enjoy the moment. What is the value of forever if it is without its moments. Great post!!!!

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8 months agoReply
Beautiful <3