The Immaculate Pretense Tanka#6





    The Immaculate Pretense

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poet_tani 15 | Back to writing; occasionally tho
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My sixth attempt at writing a tanka! I hope this one gets equal eulogy like the recent ones did! Thank you.

The Immaculate Pretense Tanka#6

Don't try seeking faults

Don't try seeking faults In people's temperament

Don't try seeking faults In people's temperament I once tried finding

Don't try seeking faults In people's temperament I once tried finding flawed men; but guess what?

Don't try seeking faults In people's temperament I once tried finding flawed men; but guess what? I found none, more flawed than me

Aside: For the hefty lot of us, who act sanctimoniously! Ponder about before castigating! Nobody is perfect. Nobody can ever be! Life is a mirror. Sooner or later it will show you who you are. Don't be condescend! There are plausibly innumerable flaws in you than you see in others. Be the one who doesn't seek flaws, but the one who sees empathy in others!

The tree rises higher but at the same time it's roots penetrate deeper into the soil. Remember, humility is greatness. However great you are, always be kind and aiding for the ones who are progressing. You won't be awarded on the mortal plane for this but surely someplace better! - Tanishk

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