The Void of Vengeance
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phantomhound555
phantomhound555 I take time, but I hit my target hard...
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One devastating attack is all that is required for one to cock a gun. But, answer from your hearts, is vengeance really the answer all the time? A special Teamwork of the best writers on Commaful.

The Void of Vengeance

A special Team Effort... Note: There are +45 pages up ahead, but it will all be worth it!

(@jerez)

(@jerez) Every day, I wake up as if you were here,

(@jerez) Every day, I wake up as if you were here, Your memory lives, so long as I breathe

(@jerez) Every day, I wake up as if you were here, Your memory lives, so long as I breathe The mark now left in my skies

(@jerez) Every day, I wake up as if you were here, Your memory lives, so long as I breathe The mark now left in my skies Trailing stars and galaxies alike,

Your love, throughout the nights

Your love, throughout the nights Wishing for more, when you are no more.

Your love, throughout the nights Wishing for more, when you are no more. Without fear, I volunteer,

Your love, throughout the nights Wishing for more, when you are no more. Without fear, I volunteer, to fill the hole, left in my soul

(@bruvton)

(@bruvton) Vengeance is what fills the void.

(@bruvton) Vengeance is what fills the void. To vindicate, I'll be deployed.

(@bruvton) Vengeance is what fills the void. To vindicate, I'll be deployed. Her fiery eyes that I despise,

(@bruvton) Vengeance is what fills the void. To vindicate, I'll be deployed. Her fiery eyes that I despise, She killed my son, caused his demise.

I watched in pain as she did reap.

I watched in pain as she did reap. For retribution, blood will seep.

I watched in pain as she did reap. For retribution, blood will seep. At any cost, her blood will spill.

I watched in pain as she did reap. For retribution, blood will seep. At any cost, her blood will spill. Kill for a kill, the relieving thrill.

(@debadityadutta12)

(@debadityadutta12) Wistful vendetta,

(@debadityadutta12) Wistful vendetta, Through my black Beretta,

(@debadityadutta12) Wistful vendetta, Through my black Beretta, Every single bullet through her head,

(@debadityadutta12) Wistful vendetta, Through my black Beretta, Every single bullet through her head, Will not stop till she’s dead,

Stalking her like a wolf ; hungry like a lion,

Stalking her like a wolf ; hungry like a lion, A meeting in the terrace ; some smiles and a gunshot to pavilion,

Stalking her like a wolf ; hungry like a lion, A meeting in the terrace ; some smiles and a gunshot to pavilion, My life is complete,

Stalking her like a wolf ; hungry like a lion, A meeting in the terrace ; some smiles and a gunshot to pavilion, My life is complete, The hole she punched through ; now sealed.

(@thepoemypie)

(@thepoemypie) A finger, a click, a drop in my gut

(@thepoemypie) A finger, a click, a drop in my gut Rivers of blood gushing to the floor

(@thepoemypie) A finger, a click, a drop in my gut Rivers of blood gushing to the floor Smile now faded, a pain jabs me from the side

(@thepoemypie) A finger, a click, a drop in my gut Rivers of blood gushing to the floor Smile now faded, a pain jabs me from the side The feeling of guilt, that I've gone too far

My son, dead... what would he think of me now?

My son, dead... what would he think of me now? Looking back now, it feels so wrong

My son, dead... what would he think of me now? Looking back now, it feels so wrong Revenge is never the answer, no matter why you did it

My son, dead... what would he think of me now? Looking back now, it feels so wrong Revenge is never the answer, no matter why you did it You will regret what you did, the mark you left on countless lives

Hey everyone! I really do hope you enjoyed this collective work of four of the most gifted writers on Commaful (in my opinion)! This wouldn't have been possible without the following people (already mentioned, but ok):

@jerez

@bruvton

@debadityadutta12

@thepoemypie

We decided to come in together and create a poem on three continuous emotions of any person who is just too devastated to think straight.

We decided to come in together and create a poem on three continuous emotions of any person who is just too devastated to think straight. So let's give a hand for these gifted writers!

Once again, thank you very much for reading, hope you enjoyed, and peace out!

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