Comes Apart
Comes Apart #trying#hard#blankverse#pain#depression#lost#poetry#sad#motivation#work#trying stories
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For those who try hard and harder everyday.

Comes Apart

by papercut

It's not like you don't try hard

You try hard Real hard

But then it all comes apart

And you are left standing knee deep in the ashes again

Don't despair Sweetheart Woman up and start building

It came apart for some reason Fulfil it .

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theartsybeanPulling myself together
8 months agoReply
I like this lots

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
This was a sensitive piece. You conveyed a respectful nature to others who do not always succeed on first attempts. Great job!!!!!