CLIMATE
CLIMATE poetry stories
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paolapenate
paolapenate18. poetess.
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my first post!.

CLIMATE

by paolapenate

I know what they say about us,

that we’re the rainbow, that even though is beautiful like it we’ll be gone soon,

i know what they say about me,

that I’m the thunderstorm, leaving nothing but wounds.

I know what they say about you,

that you’re the sun, and with a smile you change lives.

You wanna know what I think about us?

that you’re the air helping me breathe,

and I’m water helping you grow.

and together we are the rain.

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paolapenate18. poetess.
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you!

paolapenate18. poetess.
a year agoReply
@therinamartins thank you so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was an amazing first offing. You consumed me with your positive approach to life. The poem was well constructed free verse yet it still possessed a lyricism mindful of a sonnet. Your word choices were understandable and appropriate. This was excellent.

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
Amazing poem! I loved it and am totally going to post it on my Twitter! Im the Ambassador manager here at Commaful, so if you ever need any help around here, feel free to contact me. Welcome to the community, by the way! We're happy to have such an amazing poet with us!

paolapenate18. poetess.
a year agoReply
@lisa thank you!, and It was.

lisaSilver CommaCats
a year agoReply
awww this is adorable. great first post! is this dedicated to somebody?