Those with the Beady Eyes
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Those with the Beady Eyes

by origami

A rat is like a human,

loving not what they can

Their eyes are very curious

looking for the mysterious

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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My son used to have a pet rat. I loved the minimalist approach at the lyrical and descriptive verse in your poem. Great post.!!!!
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