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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
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i can't fuck this up.

right.

by olifinch182

i know i want to do this right.

but i don't know what syntax and sentence structures compose the true vision of our stuttered breaths.

in and out in flashes

catching up to holding on to and inevitably replicating the fireworks inside our chests and fingertips.

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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
#118

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
a rooftop is a double edged sword
there were two sides to the two nights.

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
on night in a new town.



olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year agoReply
@marino danke!

marinoBronze Commahehe
a year agoReply
this is adorable :) :)

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil i love that haha, thank you.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was very romantic. Do I need to say it was written very well written? OK, it was very well written. If I were young and single again. I would memorize this and tell my latest love that I wrote it for her.