camel red 100's.
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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
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don't leave me please, i'm a walking travesty.

camel red 100's.

by olifinch182

i used to breath alright

until you made me quit smoking. now i'm relying on you to take my breath away and give it back every time we kiss to keep my lungs in check. your lungs are part of such a perfect eclipse.

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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
right.
i can't fuck this up.

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
when you left.

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
I am no poet alone.
some spilled ink from a book i'll never write :) i...



bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was an excellent piece of writing, The way you fit the words into the verses gave it a rhythm that was irresistible. It is especially good given its​ brevity.

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year agoReply
@venice wow...thank you you're incredibly sweet

veniceBronze Commatwitter: @muyven
a year agoReply
i had to read it over and over again because it was that good.