a rooftop is a double edged sword
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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
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there were two sides to the two nights.

a rooftop is a double edged sword

by olifinch182

where's the point in begging?

when you let me down don't bother sending a parachute to win me over. i've felt closer to comfort atop rooftop edges in the dark.

not a single one of us spoke

on the way back to the car. we walked from silence into submission and fell to witness the explosions of brilliant clarity born in the sky above us....

now bruised with the reverberations of our sweet talk and empty promises.

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bernardtwindwilGifted WriterGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This resonated with me and I am sure thousands of others. You captured the mood and affect so brilliantly. Your graphics are tucked into the verses with an easy comfort.