The Unspoken
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niamzouarryI like too many bands.
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
It's short and a work in progress but yeah (:

The Unspoken

by niamzouarry

Words.

Words on an invisible line, cherished like a piece of the person you're missing.

You.

You keep them hidden in the hole of your heart or in the mind you're dismissing.

Keep.

Keep them hidden from the ones around you as they remain within a dry throat.

Unspoken.

Unspoken as you remain broken, the heavy words dragging you down like a depressive coat.

Words. You. Keep. Unspoken.

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niamzouarryI like too many bands.
a year agoReply
@therinamartins Yes it was and thank you! I'll let you know if I ever do (:

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a year agoReply
Love the format! Was that a dead mouse on slide three? If you ever need any help around Commaful, don't hesitate in contacting me, okay? I'd love to help you!

niamzouarryI like too many bands.
a year agoReply
@benj thank you (:

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a year agoReply
great start! i love it!

niamzouarryI like too many bands.
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you!

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a year agoReply
That was a very impressive display of end rhyme vocabulary. Yet you delivered them most subtle message in that poem. The meter of the poem just danced along. Good thought and excellent ecxecution.