A short story that I've been working on the past few days. I don't know how I feel about but feedback is appreciated :)

Hey everyone, I've really been trying to start writing a book but I have no idea where to start or what to write about. Everything Ive made ideas on are too similar to books already written and can s...

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This is the first poem I have ever written. Im not sure how I feel about it but feedback is much appreciated :)