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nathanhaynes
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The ending to a cherished relationship is likened to a short story . we ask what if? When does it ? And whose going to ? But we never know even when it end . i give u. Then ending to my short story about two lovers , companions , best friends who find love and keep it till death

As i felt the cold texture of her hands pressed tightly  against mine, all i could think of was cherishing this moribund moment.

it was as if a spark from a candle wick was losing it's flame, and it's sense of comfort. Her love was the fire that warmed my heart .

With a gentle smile, she looked at me and said "in a world full of nothing, you were all i ever had" and the smile faded slowly as a sudden voilent cough arose.

It had been a partial line to a poem she had created on the 1st night we met .

So i continued, " and as long as i would have you , i knew that life wouldnt be so bad" , just then i felt a time - honored grip coming from her fragile dying hand,

as if her grip was reflecting the strength of our friendship throughout time throughout the sorrowing moment .

Smiling at each others presence,  i began to shed a tear, as the asorbtion of this moment was becoming overwhelming for me to handle.

The very thought of losing the one thing, the one person , i thought would be forever.

I managed to regather my self and finish the poem .

" it was with you i found happiness , and thru you i had nothing to hide;

Together ,worked our deepest secrets and turned  treasures into time;

You are more than just a friend to me, you were my first taste of forever,

And no matter how far u were away from me! We always found a way together."

Just then i felt her grip was beginning to loosen up , every second became agonising, as i was trying to grip her hand more it was obvious that i was the only one  holding us together,

it was like her hand was that moment .. I just couldnt let go.

I had felt so lost that  i began to say the poem again and again and again

"in a world full of nothing, you were all i ever had;

and as long as i would have you , i knew that life wouldnt be so bad;

it was with you i found happiness , and thru you i had nothing to hide;

Together ,worked our deepest secrets and turned  treasures into time;

You are more than just a friend to me, you were my first taste of forever,

And no matter how far u were away from me! We always found a way together."

"in a world full of nothing, you were all i ever had;

and as long as i would have you , i knew that life wouldnt be so bad;

it was with you i found happiness , and thru you i had nothing to hide;

Together ,worked our deepest secrets and turned  treasures into time;

You are more than just a friend to me, you were my first taste of forever,

And no matter how far u were away from me! We always found a way together."

(The scene starts to fade and the story starts to end and this is the tragic story of two beautiful friends)

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