The Broken Girl
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myworldiswondercreative until I die™ 💕
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So this short rhyming story about a girl I know, who really messed me up emotionally to the point where
my confidence was so low I thought I would never be able to fix myself.

Hope you enjoy!

The Broken Girl

by myworldiswonder

There was a girl amazing in her own way

however she could not see it with each passing day

I thought she would accept me like a good friend would do

but there was a something wrong deep inside her, that no one else knew

She could have built me up when I was at my lowest

but instead she had the intellagance that made me feel like the slowest

Looking for approval from others as she picked at

my character; I felt despair and I thought she was my editor

Her outburst of anger scared us all

we recognized something was wrong; even if she'd never admit the fall

Saying stop was not an option, she would be so relentless

at each word; she made be believe that her thoughts were the ones that were heard.

At one point it got so bad, sessions where booked

for my sanity; how could I have let myself upon this tragedy

Before I let her intellectual words corrupt my

brain; I held an impeccable confidence that never was refrained

But now it's broken.

trying to fit itself back together...

maybe one day I'll feel

just a little bit better.

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Hahaha well thanks! XD I'm not the best writer I'm more for visuals but I like to write so I can be better at it.

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a year agoReply
Yes, it is hard to be picked on. You wrote a respectable poem. It needs proofreading. That being said, it was a deeply revealing and honest poem. This poem will go a long way toward fixing yourself. Next, write one for me as to how she is an ironbound stone cold bitch.

a year agoReply
@myworldiswonder i know how it feels for sure. you have to be strong :) it gets better!

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a year agoReply
@george Aww thanks! I'm doing okay its been hard but I'm getting myself back together :)

a year agoReply
wow :( great story. i hope you're okay!!