The Untitled Poem

mrinaaldattLaw student. Aspiring writer.
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The Untitled Poem

by mrinaaldatt

The one I loved and almost lost.

I saw death from the closest quarters and it was not me who was dying, 'twas someone I love perhaps more than myself; anything else, I would be lying.

My angel. My guiding light.

First glance at him,I knew I'd found my guardian angel, but today I sat next to him in a vehicle with high pitched sirens, transfixed as roles reversed; and my blessing turned into my biggest c

I looked into his milky eyes seeing not even a cry for help, my own cries doused by the sirens or maybe the alarm bells ringing in my head.

I kept screaming his name and then some more for that's what the doctor told me- "your words are the only thing keeping him alive. So just talk to him, please"

Hanging by a thread

I was scared to death, an irony of sorts and yet my tears won't fall; baby I've loved you more than you can ever know and I have to tell you that you're all I had been waiting for...

Between dreams and doom

You can't leave me like this for we've just started and there are too many miles to go, too many places to be and too many kisses left incomplete.

He suddenly takes a short breath, breathing a new life into me. Now the only challenge is to keep those breaths going, till the time we reach..."

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This was so well written that I am in amazement. The poem was measured and had a mellifluous flow. The narration was grasping my attention and did not let go. This was outstanding. Great poem​.

mrinaaldattLaw student. Aspiring writer.
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@sydney thanks love. Untitled because how else can you possibly describe having a loved one fight for his life in front of your eyes?

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
Wow powerful poem! Why untitled ❤️