See With Me
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marvelstonez1Community member
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A Poem by Jacqueline Brown ©2016 < br/>(youtu.be/4csrJJ_iatg)

See With Me

by Jacqueline Brown

on bended knee, I so plea take me! accept me! be with me! breathe with me! see with me! I can see, I can surely see that only you are the one for me let's just be i'm filled with such glee

everytime I see thee it's so amazing, really amazing, truly amazing, you got me dazing I'm convinced there's absolutely no one else for me accept me! accept me! accept me fully!

see what I see, i'm asking you to see with me

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9 months agoReply
@felonious ... Thank you so so much.

9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil ... Thank you so so much.

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9 months agoReply
im asking someone as well, best wishes and well done, great work

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9 months agoReply
This was a beautiful plea for love. It was well written your tumbling rhyming meter was irresistible. You had me nodding my head to the beat. Great job!!! Welcome to the greatest society on Earth. I am looking forward to reading your posts.

9 months agoReply
@sydney Thank you so much!

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9 months agoReply
Amazing job !!