trapped inside
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maerakis❝ water born & skies rocketed ❞
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a haunting lullaby within a feat of disaster

trapped inside

by sheaberry

I'm trapped inside a spectral house hogtied & muted by tape

throughout the years, I have collected and gathered a final feat of escape

what's that? a house? be quiet as a mouse!!

as you encounter the trail of a frightening little tale

come on come on as we all follow along

through the path of leaves enjoy it, as you please

come forth come forth bring your lights and your torch

as the you enter the nights shadowed by the frights

come clear, don't fret I'm not finished yet

with this swollen mystery and a horrific history

of a women and men in love, again and again

but where they went is the story I've sent

as their life holds a game they're shattered in flames

of encountered hopes and fame that has led to worthless shames

but, look right here!! the spirits are clear

no one wanted to be drenched in puddles of fury and revenge

they grab and they shriek a helpless and innocent me

with no one to send some help I'm stuck with the ghosts that yelp

I'm trapped inside a spectral house hogtied & muted by tape

through the years, I have collected and gathered a final feat of escape

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@sheaberry I knew I could count on you

maerakisBronze Comma❝ water born & skies rocketed ❞
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I promise that I won't let you down :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
You are welcome. I want to see you progress from excellent poet to immortal poet.

maerakisBronze Comma❝ water born & skies rocketed ❞
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil none taken!! But I've never really thought of this, because I have started writing poetry and making poems. But thank you for the suggestions and fixations, it means alot :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@sheaberry meter (in the US) metre (in England et al) is the number of syllables in your sentence or line structure. That become a repetitive theme. You have extraordinary internal rhyming. Those are rhymes in the middle of a sentence. You external rhyming also artistically created Those are the rhymes at the end of a line or sentence. I found this website that will help explain. Please do not take offense you have the soul and tongue of a poet. http://www.writing.upenn.... I am expecting big things from you.

maerakisBronze Comma❝ water born & skies rocketed ❞
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thanks for the suggestions!! however, I'm sort of new of commaful and everything, so what do you mean about meter needing attention?

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
The graphics were sublime your words fit hand and glove with the graphics. I think the meter could use some attention but it was fantastic.

maerakisBronze Comma❝ water born & skies rocketed ❞
a year agoReply
@larry thank you very much :)

larryBronze Commai'm batman
a year agoReply
so beautiful!

a year agoReply
it is so easy to get and feel trapped. physically and emotionally