Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒
      
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My first attempt writing a villanelle; forgive any eventual mistakes.

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Pen name: Alyssa O’Rowane
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Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 ashes and gore

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes and gore

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes and gore π”₯

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes and gore π”₯ π”ž

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes and gore π”₯ π”ž 𝔑

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes and gore π”₯ π”ž 𝔑 𝔬

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes and gore π”₯ π”ž 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes gore π”₯ π”ž and 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 a𝔰hes gore π”₯ π”ž and 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 π”Ÿ a𝔰hes gore π”₯ π”ž and 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 π”Ÿ a𝔰hes g𝔬re π”₯ π”ž and 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 π”Ÿ a𝔰hes g𝔬re π”₯ 𝔫 π”ž and 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 π”Ÿ a𝔰hes g𝔬re π”₯ 𝔫 π”ž and 𝔒 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴

Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒 π”Ÿ a𝔰hes g𝔬re π”₯ 𝔫 π”ž and 𝔒 𝔑 𝔬 𝔴 Twilight eclipses on your crownless Majesty’s home.

Brimming,

Brimming, the moonlight once shone

Brimming, the moonlight once shone on what rends you now

Brimming, 𝔭 the moonlight once shone on what rends you now

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on what rends you now

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, π”ž 𝔭 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, π”ž 𝔭 𝔩 the mo𝔬nlight once shone on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, π”ž 𝔭 𝔩 the mo𝔬nlight once sh𝔬ne on 𝔴hat rends you now 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, π”ž 𝔭 𝔩 the mo𝔬nlight once sh𝔬ne on 𝔴hat rends you 𝔫ow 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, π”ž 𝔭 𝔩 the mo𝔬nlight once sh𝔬ne on 𝔴hat rends you 𝔫ow 𝔒 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰

Brimming, π”ž 𝔭 𝔩 the mo𝔬nlight once sh𝔬ne on 𝔴hat rends you 𝔫ow 𝔒 𝔒 𝔯 and 𝔩 𝔒 𝔰 𝔰 Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒

Priests

Priests 𝔠𝔲𝔯𝔰𝔒

Priests 𝔠𝔲𝔯𝔰𝔒 over the crooning of a crone.

Priests 𝔠𝔲𝔯𝔰𝔒 over the crooning of a crone. β€œπ˜žπ˜°π˜¦ 𝘣𝘦𝘡π˜ͺπ˜₯𝘦 𝘡𝘩π˜ͺ𝘯𝘦 π˜₯𝘺𝘯𝘒𝘴𝘡𝘺, π˜°β€™ 𝘸π˜ͺ𝘀𝘬𝘦π˜₯ 𝘧𝘰𝘢𝘭. π˜‰π˜¦ 𝘨𝘰𝘯𝘦!”

Priests 𝔠𝔲𝔯𝔰𝔒 over the crooning of a crone. β€œπ˜žπ˜°π˜¦ 𝘣𝘦𝘡π˜ͺπ˜₯𝘦 𝘡𝘩π˜ͺ𝘯𝘦 π˜₯𝘺𝘯𝘒𝘴𝘡𝘺, π˜°β€™ 𝘸π˜ͺ𝘀𝘬𝘦π˜₯ 𝘧𝘰𝘢𝘭. π˜‰π˜¦ 𝘨𝘰𝘯𝘦!” Twilight eclipses on your crownless Majesty’s home.

This kingdom is a battlefield,

This kingdom is a battlefield, plǝıɟǝlʇʇɐq ɐ

This kingdom is a π”ž π”Ÿπ”žπ”±π”±π”©π”’π”£π”¦π”’π”©π”‘ β„‘ 𝔬𝔴𝔫. For this I was born;

This kingdom is a π”ž π”Ÿπ”žπ”±π”±π”©π”’π”£π”¦π”’π”©π”‘ β„‘ 𝔬𝔴𝔫. For this I was born; uΙΉoq

This kingdom is a π”ž π”Ÿπ”žπ”±π”±π”©π”’π”£π”¦π”’π”©π”‘ β„‘ 𝔬𝔴𝔫. For this I was π”Ÿπ”¬π”―π”«; to see you by my own deeds ο½ο½–ο½…ο½’ο½”ο½ˆο½’ο½ο½—ο½Ž.

This kingdom is a π”ž π”Ÿπ”žπ”±π”±π”©π”’π”£π”¦π”’π”©π”‘ β„‘ 𝔬𝔴𝔫. For this I was π”Ÿπ”¬π”―π”«; to see you by my own deeds ο½ο½–ο½…ο½’ο½”ο½ˆο½’ο½ο½—ο½Ž. Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒.

Kick, beg and scream.

Kick, beg and scream. Crumble before my gaze turned to stone.

Kick, beg and scream. Crumble before my gaze turned to stone. 𝔑𝔬𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔫𝔀 will save you.

Kick, beg and scream. Crumble before my gaze turned to stone. 𝔑𝔬𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔫𝔀 will save you. The seed of destruction is already sown.

Kick, beg and scream. Crumble before my gaze turned to stone. 𝔑𝔬𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔫𝔀 will save you. The seed of destruction is already sown. π‘»π’˜π’Šπ’π’Šπ’ˆπ’‰π’• π’†π’„π’π’Šπ’‘π’”π’†π’” 𝒐𝒏 π’šπ’π’–π’“ π’„π’“π’π’˜π’π’π’†π’”π’” π‘΄π’‚π’‹π’†π’”π’•π’šβ€™π’” π’‰π’π’Žπ’†.

Crows dispel the crowd as I maim the throne

Crows dispel the crowd as I maim the throne of the headless king orphaned in his own home.

Crows dispel the crowd as I maim the throne of the headless king orphaned in his own home. 𝔖𝔲𝔯𝔯𝔒𝔫𝔑𝔒𝔯

Crows dispel the crowd as I maim the throne of the headless king orphaned in his own home. 𝔖𝔲𝔯𝔯𝔒𝔫𝔑𝔒𝔯 𝔱π”₯𝔒

Crows dispel the crowd as I maim the throne of the headless king orphaned in his own home. 𝔖𝔲𝔯𝔯𝔒𝔫𝔑𝔒𝔯 𝔱π”₯𝔒 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒.

Crows dispel the crowd as I maim the throne of the headless king orphaned in his own home. 𝔖𝔲𝔯𝔯𝔒𝔫𝔑𝔒𝔯 𝔱π”₯𝔒 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒. 𝔗𝔴𝔦𝔩𝔦𝔀π”₯𝔱 𝔒𝔠𝔩𝔦𝔭𝔰𝔒𝔰 𝔬𝔫 𝔢𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔠𝔯𝔬𝔴𝔫𝔩𝔒𝔰𝔰 π”π”žπ”§π”’π”°π”±π”Άβ€™π”° π”₯𝔬π”ͺ𝔒.

Β© 2020 Grazia Testa All rights reserved. Pen name: Alyssa O’Rowane Commaful: @maddie_hatter Wattpad: _MaddieHatter_ Instagram: alyssa_orowane

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