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LostInMyDreamsDelving deeper into the unknown
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I don't care how mad you might become with someone, NEVER shut them out! We have to do better with communicating with the people we "care" about. This piece portrays what lack of communication can do to a person. I hope it brings awareness to everyone.

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by LostInMyDreams

I am burried alive and no one hears me.

I am alone.

I scream, I pout, I even throw "temper tantrums"

I am alone.

I talk to myself, because no one else can hear me.

I am alone.

I am waiting for someone to hear me and help me.

I am alone.

No one hears me. They never have, they never will.

I am alone.

I feel like I am going crazy, UGHH no one hears me!

I am alone.

Maybe no one hears me because truthfully I am dead.

I am alone.

I am burried alive and no one hears me.

I am alone.

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9 months agoReply
Thank you! Your feedback is always helpful!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
You used the redundant verse most artistically. The words were well chosen in yo0ur interim verses. Great poem!!!!!