Quicksand
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LostInMyDreamsDelving deeper into the unknown
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A poem about the feelings of being in the trenches of a relationship.

Quicksand

by LostInMyDreams

Everything was going fine. We were doing well That's why it's so hard. So hard for me to understand...exactly how we fell.

No we were not perfect. None of us are. But how did the distance. How did the distance get so far.

Between us.

Time spent together was plenty. You couldn't keep us apart. But how do we get back there? Back to our start.

It feels like we are drowning in quicksand. The more we fight the quicker we are pulled in.

It feels like we are drowning in quicksand. It seems impossible for us to win.

It feels like we are drowning in quicksand. The more we fight, the quicker we are pulled in.

It feels like we are drowning in quicksand. I won't let go. I won't give in.

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tabnash24You'll know me as you read ;)
a month agoReply
@LostInMyDreams No problem, keep writing :)

LostInMyDreamsDelving deeper into the unknown
a month agoReply
@tabnash24 I'm glad you loved it! Thanks for reading and commenting.

tabnash24You'll know me as you read ;)
a month agoReply
Loved it

Stariana-1357A writer with big dreams.
a month agoReply
@LostInMyDreams No problem! Thank you for writing it!

LostInMyDreamsDelving deeper into the unknown
a month agoReply
@stariana00 Thank you for reading and commenting!! I'm glad you liked it!!

Stariana-1357A writer with big dreams.
a month agoReply
Wow...that was powerful.