I Should've Known You'd Be Back
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LostInMyDreamsDelving deeper into the unknown
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Just a quick freestyle about an unwanted visitor.

I Should've Known You'd Be Back

by LostInMyDreams

It's amazing how I managed to avoid you for about a year or two.

But somehow. You just show up, unwanted and out of the blue.

I thought I was doing an excellent job of hiding, during our games of hide and seek.

Now it's obvious that while your eyes were supposed to be closed, you decided to peek.

Day turned to night. Night turned to day. Weeks past, months pasts, a year or two gone away.

You came into my home mid yesterday. You think you will get comfortable, you think you will stay.

Let me be clear in what I'm about to say. I have already begun my plot to get rid of you if not tomorrow it WILL be Wednesday.

Now you want to attack me. Hitting me in my chest, and my throat.

I might be weak now...Please believe that's not all she wrote.

I woke up this morning coughing. My body begins to ache. Round one goes to you sinus infection. But two is for me...make no mistake.

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7 months agoReply
@justshutupxd That's exactly what I was going for! I love a good plot twist. Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

justshutupxdBronze CommaA writer making the world brighter
7 months agoReply
Great comparison. Here I am believing that the entire thing is about a guy. I myself connect to it rather well on that note. And then all of a sudden~ complete plot twist. Keep up the good work. :)

LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
8 months agoReply
Lol! Thanks! All I could think about was me being sick. Then I decided to write about being sick. I hope your wife gets rid of her unwanted visitor soon. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
This should be a classic. I feel for you and the damn sinusitis. My wife is on antibiotics and steroids as I write this. Great post!!!!