You forgot
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lostangelA girl who thought she was loved
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You forgot

by lostangel

You forgot about our first kiss

But I remember every detail about it

You forgot about the times we spent together

I remember all of them

You forgot about when we first met

I remember it like it was yesterday

You forgot about me..

And I can never forget about you..

I love you forever and always..

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
I assume that this is written to purge yourself after this unbalanced relationship. Please understand, I am trying to get some perspective. Is this "lost love" actually something you are going through or is it a writer's device? Your writing is moribund and acrimonious. Your plaintive verses are heart withering. Your ability to put this into words that are exquisitely painful is incredible. Good work!!!!