Our love
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lostangelA girl who thought she was loved
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Our love

by lostangel

Baby how do you do this, What is it that I miss? Maybe its your kiss..

I can't live without you, After everything we've been through, I hope your love is true.

Baby, just say you love me too, My love for you only grew, There's so many things I wish you knew

As the sun goes down, And the moon lights up the town, I can't help but frown

Baby I wish I was there, And a bed we could share, And at the moon we can stare

Baby I'll love you until the end of time, The highest hill I will climb, Just to see you smile before nighttime

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
6 months agoReply
This is a song. I am not sure of the tune. It is as lyrical as all get out. I loved this. Your craftsmanship is improving steadily. You have left the trite cliches behind and you have become a poet. Great poem!!!!!

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
6 months agoReply
That was a LOVELY poem! I love the unconditional love that she(or he) felt.