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lostangel
lostangelA girl who thought she was loved
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Heartbroken

by lostangel

It hurts to see you with someone else

I'm kind of jealous of her. She's perfect for you

Shes pretty, smart, nice and she treats you like a king

And you love her

You love her, but you said you loved me.

I know you lied

I know you don't love me

If you did, you wouldn't have hurt me

I hate you for doing that. But I love you

And I won't tell you because I know you love her

It hurts to talk to you knowing you don't feel the same

So this is goodbye

I'll miss you

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This is another somebody done somebody wrong song. You wrote it as a plaintive maudlin drama. You did an excellent job the way you worded your verses to create pity on the part of the reader for the heroin or should I say eternal victim in this poem. great job.