Just Ordinary
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Just Ordinary

by lost

You smell like strawberries.

I don't really have a favorite fruit. But you made strawberries my favorite.

Your eyes were like a puddle in the mud.

I never enjoyed puddles. But whenever I see them, I think of you.

Your hair was the color of sunlight.

Sunkissed. I couldn't take my eyes off it.

I wanted those strawberries, those puddles, that sunlight.

I wanted you.

Your lips tasted like honey.

I couldn't get enough.

But I found now that I had you,

I started hating the smell of strawberries.

Puddles, were just puddles.

They settle when it rains.

Sunlight was just sunlight.

You see it everyday.

Honey was just honey.

I could taste honey everywhere.

I pushed you away.

The strawberries became rotten;.

The sunlight faded.

As soon as you left

I found myself realizing, you were special, And I lost that because in my mind,

You were nothing at all.

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was worded so well that I enjoyed reading this dark tale of discovery and loss. You do a great job at writing. I loved the message of taking something for granted and then losing a treasure. Great job!

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a year agoReply
@_notlikeothers_ Yes I am in one of those sad moods today. Also, thank you I appreciate the encouragement a lot!

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a year agoReply
Well thant took a turn for the worst...your writing is pretty cool though...keep doing it