Feeling helpless
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LiseypVery deep thinker fun loving people pers
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Feeling helpless

by lisaprice

Here is a poor woman who is always tired, who lived in a house that noone admired, her last words will be "dear friend i am going,to a place were theres no cleaning or sewing,

For everything there is exactly as i wanted,to a place were wishes are granted,il be were loud anthems will always be ringing,but having no voice means there will be no singing,

Dont mourn for me now, dont mourn me forever,cos im going to do nothing for ever and ever.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
You change tone and mood here using your words to convey the message of a woman who has had just too much. Great poem!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
Aww. We all feel those feelings sometime. Great depiction