Tired
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laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
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Hi! I hope you enjoy this post I made.

Tired

by laxamanaysa

Every time I come home,

I let out a tired moan and groan Not because of all the work Not because I am hurt

My cheeks feel raw from smiling

My arms ache from always holding on I have forgotten what it feels like to be happy What it feels like to be free

I am tired, I grit my teeth in anger

Not caring about the danger 'I'm alright', 'I'm okay Those lies I say

I can't remember warmth anymore

I am isolated in this world of nothing Oh how I long to be cared for

I am just so tired, of everything.

Thank you for reading!

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8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
This was excellent . I loved the rhyme scheme within the stanzas. Then you placed those stanzas in a lyrical order that reminded me very much of Dr. Seuss. That is a compliment from me. I loved the good Dr.'s work. Your theme was a more significant. The nature of our young people is being assaulted by denying them enough rest and sleep. You wrote a poem for those hundreds of millions of young people who are tired all the time. Thank you for this great poem!!!!!!