Blame
Blame stories
  18 likes
  •   5 comments
Share

laxamanaysa
laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
The feeling when you think when you're the one to blame. This post means a lot to me, because I think we've all experienced this, even me...
It's nice to post something again on Commaful, since I never really had the time. So I hope you enjoy and can relate to this post!

Blame

by laxamanaysa

Is there something I'm not seeing?

Cause I've been hearing different stories, but I don't know what to believe....

Give me a reason...

To know why you left.

Did I do something? Please tell me...

Because I'm not healing and learning from the pain you caused.

Why did you change?

What did I do?

What happened to our story? Do we even have hope?

You threw it away...

Holding to the memories of you and me.

I want to be your everything and more, but that didn't happen.

Maybe we're just a memory, a once in a lifetime opportunity.

Just a box of souvenirs.

And maybe I'm the one to blame.

Stories We Think You'll Love
laxamanaysaGifted WriterWriting is my escape from the real world
a year ago
Blocking Out Everything
I'm back!!!!! I'm sorry for not updating anymore, ...

laxamanaysaGifted WriterWriting is my escape from the real world
9 months ago
Finding Depth
This poem is written at the last week or first wee...

laxamanaysaGifted WriterWriting is my escape from the real world
10 months ago
Heartbroken
Love is a ruthless game unless we play it good and...



laxamanaysaGifted WriterWriting is my escape from the real world
a year agoReply
@michaelschulze :)

a year agoReply
You are not responsible for the way a person treats you. You are however responsible for the way you treat yourself BE KIND

laxamanaysaGifted WriterWriting is my escape from the real world
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Blame is such a weird concept. Once it is affixed to a certain person or thing, it resolves nothing. There is no succor or closure derived from the placement of blame. Blame is subjective and ineffective. You, however, wrote beautifully about this poor person trying to affix blame, then finally coming to grips with the possibility that they will become accountable. I think many will relate to your poem. Good job.

pennySilver CommaI live for life
a year agoReply
awww <3