Envy
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lapaigehitchWriter. Dreamer. Adventurer.
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Envy

by lauren

Envy

but your eyes blaze in the inferno of your soul and stars envy them

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I like that a lot. It was incredibly powerful. The parsimony of words helped amplify the impact of the poem. It was well written as a technique. Even though the message was not original the presentation was. I loved, "and the stars envy them."

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
short and sweet :)