i hate you
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khaninsta- sumairahsuccs
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why do i love you?

i hate you

by khan

you

always made me fall in love with you

even

when you knew you couldn't love me back.

i

never wanted to love you,

but

the way your eyes crinkled a little when you laughed

and

how you always bit your lip when you were lying.

all

those aspects just made me fall even harder for you.

you

made me a fool

and

that's why i hate you,

but

we both know i'm only a fool for you.

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9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil awww thanks :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
This is a common tragedy you describe. Your words were evocative of the shattered reality of toxic relationships. You arranged the verses so that they had a lyrical quality. The meter set an agreeable tempo. The message it self is lugubrious and deeply moving. It makes the reader want to reach out to you. Great post!!!!!