Where Did We Go Wrong?
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kaylynnAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
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How can such greatness end in a catastrophe?

Where Did We Go Wrong?

Apart

I hear his gentle breath beside me, the warmth radiating off his body. I stare at the plain white wall, my hand covering my ear. I hear my breathing, in sync with his. Unlike our relationship.

Apart

I hear her breathing, the bed sheet making a noise as she moves her leg. My hand covers my ear, my heart pounding too fast. I stare at the lampshade on the lamp crooked. Like our relationship.

Together

As they lay there, backs facing each other, their relationship slowly crumbles away, till nothing is left.

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kaylynnGifted WriterAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
a year agoReply
@jenny Thank you! ^.^

jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
a year agoReply
Awaesome! Love it

kaylynnGifted WriterAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
a year agoReply
@jeremiah Thank you. ^.^

a year agoReply
well done!! reminds me a lot of friendships and relationships that don't work out

sueCommabassadori'm strong
a year agoReply
*Darth Vader voice* Noooooo

shanaCommabassadorCommunity member
a year agoReply
noooo!! tell me ain't so :(

kaylynnGifted WriterAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
a year agoReply
@lisa I know :( the sad, bitter truth. Thanks for following though! ^_^ Kaylynn ^.^

lisaSilver CommaCats
a year agoReply
so sad!

kaylynnGifted WriterAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
a year agoReply
@pluto Thank you. Yes, unfortunately that's what our reality had become. Thanks for following also! ^_^ Kaylynn ^.^

plutoCommabassadorPlanets man
a year agoReply
the abridged story of many, too many, relationships :( well written!