rugged love

kaylynnAwkward writer girl @TheSilentWriter23
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"love is the perfect disaster. so sweet yet so painful."

rugged love

by kaylynn

"you're terrible for me."

"but i can't stay away."

"you consume me."

"and i wouldn't have it any other way."

"our love, isn't love."

"it's intense. breathtaking. obsessive. fast. crazy. overwhelming"

"it's not a pretty ride."

"we fight. slam doors. argue. cry."

"but we always make up."

"our pride doesn't stand between our relationship."

"some will never understand our love for one another."

"and that's okay. sometimes i don't even understand it myself."

"but the beautiful thing is,"

"our love for each other needs no justification. it's unconditional and true. we don't need to prove it to anyone."

"so that's why, on this valentine's day,"

"i give the gift that keeps on giving the whole year."

"my imperfect, rugged love for you."

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6 months agoReply
Happy Valentine's Day :) Congrats @kaylynn this is one of the winners of the Valentine's Day contest! We'll be tweeting it on the Commaful twitter!

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This felt so real. You definitely know how to make your readers feel your emotion. I'm so speechless right now all I can do is applaud you. 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽 Great post!

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6 months agoReply
OMG I absolutely adore this!!!! Not only does it make connections to myself but it explains the true definition of love!!!! I am in love with this story!! Thank you so much for displaying the truth in such a beautiful way!!!

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6 months agoReply
I could not have written this better. Or even as well. You described a tempestuous relationship that is no less loving because it is ferocious. Is Hawaii less of a paradise because it is hit by tropical furies and a volcano in regular eruption? Nay, I say! You described the 42 yr long love affair between my wife and myself. I still get a tingly thrill when I touch her. Great post!!!!

shanaCommabassadorCommunity member
6 months agoReply
your writing is always so beautiful <3