An Impersonal Illusion
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kaylynn
kaylynn Awkward writer girl
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A loose lipped cliche that isn't whimsical, but rather dismal.

An Impersonal Illusion

"you

"you are the

"you are the best

"you are the best thing

"you are the best thing to ever happen to

"you are the best thing to ever happen to me"

'me' selfishly depicts

'me' selfishly depicts she was not the world's gift

'me' selfishly depicts she was not the world's gift A mere body used

'me' selfishly depicts she was not the world's gift A mere body used for his pleasured-filled inclinations.

'best' implies she was never the first

'best' implies she was never the first An unlit pyre among blackened ash.

'thing' has such a negative denotative meaning

'thing' has such a negative denotative meaning An object whose introduction is no longer needed.

'you' illustrates

'you' illustrates her agency has faded

'you' illustrates her agency has faded A 'some' thing who is jaded.

She becomes insignificant

She becomes insignificant 'it' a more fitting designate.

The personal pronoun

The personal pronoun impersonating

The personal pronoun impersonating An impersonal objectivity.

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