Paradise
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joyouscellyjcIn love with poetry
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We are bound by Paradise

Paradise

by joyouscellyjc

We look into each other's eyes We are lost in paradise

beyond our love and the human ties, We are lost in paradise

I was taken by surprise, When we got lost in paradise

Come look into my eyes, Come let's get lost in Paradise

But as I hear the screams I despise, I realise, We are bound by Paradise

My haunted truth your wicked lies, We were always bound by Paradise

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joyouscellyjcBronze CommaIn love with poetry
a year agoReply
@lentis :))

lentisSilver CommaIf there's food, there's me
a year agoReply
@joyouscellyjc will check it out :D :D

joyouscellyjcBronze CommaIn love with poetry
a year agoReply
@sydney thank you!!!!! Haha well this is the shortened version of my original poem but I would say it depends on what you're writing. And of course I don't have any problems talking over hangouts (unfortunately I don't have Skype). My Gmail id is joyouscelly.jc@gmail.com

joyouscellyjcBronze CommaIn love with poetry
a year agoReply
@lentis yeah lol. Comma is really to tho. My wattpad is by the same name. Please read the book from the back lol. :)

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a year agoReply
@joyouscellyjc beautiful as always!! how long does it take you to write a poem like this one? P.S. @lentis @joyouscellyjc would you guys be up for a quick Skype or Google Hangouts? Would love to hear your feedback as well as your thoughts on the character limits

lentisSilver CommaIf there's food, there's me
a year agoReply
@joyouscellyjc what's your wattpad :) yeah sometimes the character limits are tough haha

joyouscellyjcBronze CommaIn love with poetry
a year agoReply
@lentis it's been quite some years. It's a pity I can't post any of my longer poems here You can check me out on wattpad if you like :))

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a year agoReply
How long have you been writing poetry for? this is great!