2 Weeks Time
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jordyfryfryCommunity member
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For the boy at the bus stop

2 Weeks Time

by jordyfryfry

In 2 weeks time

You proved that people who smile with their eyes are infinitely more beautiful

In 2 weeks time

I began to truly experience the first days of my life

In 2 weeks time

I have never smiled so hard

In 2 weeks time

I knew if I didn't hold your gaze, you might just disappear

In 2 weeks time

I think I decided that I wasn’t going to ever stop wanting to look at you

In just 2 weeks time, I realized...

I never want to do less of anything that has to do with you

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you so much. This is hands-down the best comment I've ever received, partly because of how personal it was. Your love story was quite beautiful. Not many experience a whirlwind romance, but those who do are the lucky few.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
My wife and I knew each other for three weeks before we got married forty-one years ago. This poem was beautifully written. Your words were mellifluous. Your words were descriptive and conveyed the happiness found at the beginning of something big. Great poem!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
@jordyfryfry I'm glad you like it!!

a year agoReply
@sydney thank you :) and thank you for the platform, it's quite beautiful itself

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
aww beautiful