inertia
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jenna182i believe in good people and good aliens
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that feeling when u cant discern whats real and what isnt anymore

inertia

by jenna182

lost lost am i lost?

is happiness just another illusion that my brain has tossed?

doubt doubt lingers is this real or just a trick?

careful here proceed with care make sure that you dont get sick

slow slow slow

take it slow

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This sounds very rational at first. The wording and your set up of the stanzas was just super. You carried your message without a hitch. What you see may or may not be real. Great poem!!!