ocean of stars
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A loss of life is sent to the ocean of stars.

ocean of stars

by Izal5416

Dad said,

"not everyone is good

not everyone is bad

but they all deserve one thing

which is, a chance."

i gave you a chance,

gave you my heart.

everything was perfect.

until, out of nowhere,

you left.

you left me.

up, high above,

there is an ocean of stars.

one of those stars

is you.

i know it.

you promised

you would be with me forever.

liar.

you left me.

you left me.

tell me,

what's it like up there?

in that ocean of stars?

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a year agoReply
@jenny I really appreciate it. Thanks a mill.!

jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
a year agoReply
such a deep and awesome poem!

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a year agoReply
@parrisgogh Thank you! You have no idea how much what you just said means to me.

parrisgoghArt is my reason of life.
a year agoReply
This is deep on so many levels homagawd. This touched my soul. Very beautiful poem! Amazing. Clever way of using your words, iltsm. Xx

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a year agoReply
@burniingaschs Thank you so so so much! (lmao deep stuff is what I write :P) I'm so glad this made your day, I didn't even expect this to be such a big hit o.0 I just decided on a soundtrack, except I'm going to record myself reading it instead of playing the poem to the music.

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a year agoReply
I'm just seeing this and WOW! This is so beautiful! I love how deep it is, the way you repeated those lines gave it so much more weight. I love looking at amazing poetry, this made my day. Music would be great with this! :)

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a year agoReply
@isabellathena I tend to work with repetition a lot :) Thanks so much!!

isabellathenaBronze CommaEast Of Eden
a year agoReply
The repetition really got to me! I felt so much reading this you are so talented!

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a year agoReply
@chromium Thank you!! I'm trying to pair it with a piece of music and recording it.... Just tried the Titanic soundtrack. (Decided it was too happy lol)

chromiumSilver CommaI like to think I'm amazing
a year agoReply
this is so so gorgeous omg