No Take Backs
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In life, you can only move on. There are no take backs.

No Take Backs

by inkspotz

"How could you do that?" They all screech the same thing; dying for their voices to be heard.

No one will hear them, and be able to change what has happened. It has happened. We need to all move on.

It gets so hard to even want to pick up the paper anymore. In my disorganized apartment, all I want to do is stay in bed all day.

With everything that has happened, I just want to shut out the world. It's easier to survive if you can tune it all out.

I've been told it's only downhill from here; that there is no way to climb out of this hole. I didn't need anyone telling me that though. I could see it for myself.

I wish people would stop reminding me of all that has happened in such a way that it only leaves me hurting.

Sometimes there are gentler ways to help others see a different outcome.

I suppose there is only one thing I have left to say.

I'm sorry.

I'm sorry I gave birth to it.

It's amazing what a few negative reviews by nasty people can do to your creative writing spark.

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I think that if it had not been for a few kind words of encouragement from my new found friend Bernard i would have given up by my third attempt at writing but with a bit of encouragement you don't know what will happen

inkspotzGifted and Wattpad writer
7 months agoReply
@tdog16 Know that this wasn't directed at you in anyway, sweetheart. I'm terribly sorry that you felt this was directed at you. I was directing it towards other critics that I've had in the past. I love criticism when it's constructive, and that's what yours was. That helps me to grow as a writer. I've had some not so kind things said before to me, and was making reference to that. I've been writing for quite a while now, so it happens. Please don't think I'm mad at you because I'm not. This was not directed at you in any way, shape or form. <3

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7 months agoReply
I'm sorry if you found my criticism mean:( It's in my personality to be brutally honest and it leaves people hurt:( your stories are wonderful and I only criticize those set a high standard with your talented writing and I just wanted everything.....sorry for hurting your feelings I'll try not to point out the flaws and only the good........ugh I feel so bad now because you are an AMAZING writer and I made you seem like you weren't.......just keep on writing please your stories are too good.

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7 months agoReply
In the words of someone famous..."Haters gonna hate!" Keep writing. Keep creating. Keep being you. Unfortunately we all have the right to say pretty much whatever we feel like saying. So here's me saying what I want to say: You are too deep, too advanced, too gifted, too genuine for those incompetent, people to even begin to try and understand your level of creative genius! And you can quote me on that!! *politely steps down from my soap box and walks away as if nothing happened*

7 months agoReply
i've really enjoyed your writing! i hope you will keep sharing your wonderous ideas and stories to this world!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller,
7 months agoReply
I am sorry that has happened. Your writing is beautifully descriptive and takes the reader along the path you lead. Never apologize for something as innocuous as writing. Any moron can criticize. It takes someone who knows what they are talking about to tell you what you are doing right. Your word choice is delicate and downright earthy in its tender patterns. Great post!!!