Venetian blinds






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hurley
hurley Soif de vivre
Autoplay OFF   •   a year ago
The year started and I completely disappeared from commaful, I know. I Really did miss writing posting though. Here's my first poem to break the drought! Tell me what you think!

Venetian blinds

The warmth of the sun always felt better in lines,

a profound yet peaceful distortion of time,

serene yet musing, light mind

listen as she equivocates in rhyme

too dulcet to reject; a victimless crime.

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