Count of Three
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hannahdycusJo. 16 years old. I write poems.
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Count of Three

by hannahdycus

One...

we decided to give each other our hearts

Two...

on the count of three

Three.

the thing is, im finding my hands empty

and yours full

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
That was wonderful. You have such a dynamic literary sense. The "1...2...3..." was so simple and sensitive that you were able to portray your message in the most minimal terms. No explication was needed. I counted 26 total words including the number texts. Yet, you were able to convey one of the deepest emotional dilemmas in life.

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a year agoReply
1.....2.....3!!! loved it!