The Final Step
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Like and Comment! What is your final step? Have you been to the edge?
#shortstory2016#sadness#depression#love#suicide#endless#void#helpless

The Final Step

by felonious

FIYAAAAAAAAAA

And now we take that final step

Past the boundary of our breath

"Welcome to the other side..."

"Like we said, this is death"

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9 months ago•Reply•
@bernardtwindwil im pessimistically optimistic
bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year ago•Reply•
Wel,l aren't you just the optimist. I loved it. On two levels. 1. It appealed to my sadistic sense of humor. 2. It was cleverly written you led me down the primrose path to the final verse. Wow. Great poem!!~!!
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