Ran This Dawn
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fadhillainggitaQuiet black pen girl's writing poetry
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Ran This Dawn

by fadhillainggita

I ran this dawn

But I couldn't move on

Walked alone pretend fine

But I'm still in this mess up line

I was hastening

The sun's shining

Reaching the light

But my shadow's making me fright

I went this early morning

Found fresh air for breathing

But my chest's suffocating

While I was running

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fadhillainggitaQuiet black pen girl's writing poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was an excellent well-written piece. The message was intense. Great job