Eliot

@eliot_sunz

a faerie once asked for my attention


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Eliot . 7 months ago
Definitely one of my favorites, 10/10 would write inside the cover of a fresh notebook, or in ink on my arm. Whatever feelings spurred this poem in the midst of apathy, they served you well here if th... Read More
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Tay . 8 months ago
Immortality
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Eliot . 7 months ago
the wordsmithing here is fantastic, I really enjoyed reading it. This could be a metaphor or a vivid observation, and the rhymes were just so nice, not forced and so interesting.
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SecretGeek . a year ago
By the Roadside
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Eliot . 7 months ago
A poem which radiates with the voice of a classic tortured artist, and a fantastic read. This is going on my list of favorites for sure.
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Parker (Words Alive) . 7 months ago
How can I not be a Poet?
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Eliot . 7 months ago
Wild, be on your guard
Running the dnd campaign Wild Beyond the Witchlight soon and oh boy am I planning on hurting my players. I'm allowed a little bit of a god complex, yknow, as a treat.
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Eliot . 8 months ago
Hungry
Ah, the guilt of being vividly hot and cold
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Eliot . 8 months ago
Study Haul
I may have felt a bit petty trying to do my classics paper with people using a quiet space to be loud and annoying. When I'm stressed, those kinds of things anger me to a wildly unreasonable extent, s...
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Eliot . 8 months ago
Some
daily prompt, sure, but I try to be honest and meaningful with these anyways. This is something that's been weighing on my mind recently anyways, so it's good to get this out. Thanks for reading! (...
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Eliot . 8 months ago
The ace up your sleeve
something I wrote last year
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Eliot . 8 months ago
Dew on the Grass
The opening line was accidental poetry- a profound text that I later realized had much more to say in proper verse. So I present to you, the rest of that text the receiver would likely find confusingl...
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Eliot . 8 months ago
Hexagon Cage
This one's an experiment with meter- dactylic hexameter (look it up, it's old but gold)- as well as a braindump of feeling stuck in a stifling but demanding high school when I am just waiting to go to...
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Eliot . 2 years ago
written in sand
daily prompt submission! don't ask who got me writing like that ~
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Eliot . 2 years ago
the sound of us
submission for the daily prompt! enjoy <3
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Eliot . 2 years ago
the soul's shackles
submission for the daily prompt! hope you enjoy <3
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Eliot . 2 years ago
Gravity
"brooo who got you writing like that?"
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Eliot . 2 years ago
Rose Gold
i figured i should balance the darker poems i've posted with some more cheerful content, so enjoy this lovey-dovey ramble of mine.
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Eliot . 2 years ago
Ghosts in the trees
submission for the daily prompt. hope you enjoy! note: when the poem mentions death, it is //NOT// referring to suicide, it is a metaphor for disappearing, in this case to become "ghosts" which is, ...
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Eliot . 2 years ago
for the purposes of mocking a friend
i figure this will be a welcome change of pace from all the gloomy feels
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Eliot . 2 years ago
There's violence in those eyes
turns out i can just,, not make these complicated visually? enjoy me slacking off in the visuals department for the sake of publicizing feelings i experienced at 1 in the morning
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Eliot . 2 years ago
Heavy
This poem is less a narrative of existence and more so an attempt of mine to capture a certain, fleeting mood.
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Eliot . 2 years ago
After the Fire
This is a poem I wrote a while ago, I've been working on turning it into a song.
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