Commaful Appreciation Piece Inspired by @Poeticwater pieces -Anxiety- and commaful’s community :D
Commaful Appreciation Piece
Inspired by @Poeticwater pieces -Anxiety- and commaful’s community :D anxiety stories
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duskthoughts
duskthoughts Empathy-The voice of understanding
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Showing some appreciation for the Commaful community with this piece Appreciating the clarity and relief it gave me.

Commaful Appreciation Piece Inspired by @Poeticwater pieces -Anxiety- and commaful’s community :D

Author note;- I really enjoyed English literature during high school, I moved on to college where I decided to take it. My English professor would tell me I was wrong, no matter what input I gave. I lost my ability to feel confident in my writing so I quit college early and gave up writing. Here I am now on Commaful a few years later. The community gave me back what I had lost- Thank you!

The Doubtful Bubble.

You handcrafted a bubble from the mucus of hateful word

You handcrafted a bubble from the mucus of hateful word where I would suffocate

you taught me to use perhaps

you taught me to use perhaps for the reader

you taught me to use perhaps for the reader will never know the intentions

you taught me to use perhaps for the reader will never know the intentions but I was still wrong?

the bubble grew

the bubble grew it understood

the bubble grew it understood so I thought

the bubble grew it understood so I thought the BOLD words

the bubble grew it understood so I thought the BOLD words and those that faded

Perhaps I am stupid

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true

Perhaps I am stupid Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID Perhaps I am wrong Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID I am WRONG Perhaps I can’t do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID I am WRONG I CAN’T do things right Perhaps I am too different Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID I am WRONG I CAN’T do things right I am TOO DIFFERENT Perhaps I don’t understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID I am WRONG I CAN’T do things right I am TOO DIFFERENT I DON’T understand Perhaps I should listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID I am WRONG I CAN’T do things right I am TOO DIFFERENT I DON’T understand I SHOULD listen Perhaps your words are true Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

I am STUPID I am WRONG I CAN’T do things right I am TOO DIFFERENT I DON’T understand I SHOULD listen YOUR WORDS ARE TRUE Possibilities of uncertainty turned into false clarity

Until it stopped

Fresh air hit me,

Fresh air hit me, for the first time,

Fresh air hit me, for the first time, the bubble burst,

no longer having my lungs drown

no longer having my lungs drown in doubtful spits,

no longer having my lungs drown in doubtful spits, My story,

no longer having my lungs drown in doubtful spits, My story, saved,

no longer having my lungs drown in doubtful spits, My story, saved, by the comma,

no longer having my lungs drown in doubtful spits, My story, saved, by the comma, I could finally breathe.

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