Straight From my Head
Straight From my Head i-hate-that stories
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darklyloved
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What yo hated once you will love now.

Straight From my Head

by darklyloved

This story is going to be different. I'm going to make it up as I go based on the photos already there. So remember. Everything is raw thoughts popping from my head.

As I waited and enjoyed the view,

I heard the water behind me splash.

I smelt a scent that reminded me of trees and nature.

Then I remember the lost things that are too distant for me.

I wish to return to the wildness I once hated.

But now I live in the city. A place I still don't understand

But I'm on my way now.

Back to the wilderness and chaos that I was born in.

Goodbye tall building that intimidated me

and welcome back universe, that I once hated.

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8 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams I'll be sure to read it then! Have fun with it!

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8 months agoReply
@darklyloved I think I will take a crack at it later and see what I can cook up.

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8 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams @bernardtwindwil Thank you so much! I don't even know where the thought came from, but I was like I need to do this to prove myself a good writer! And that would be a great writing challenge for Commaful to have!

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8 months agoReply
Loved it!! I think that should be a writing challenge! Great idea!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
This was ingenious. You showed your chops as a writer than being able to go with the flow of the pictures. Most impressive. Great story!!!!!!