Hold my Hand
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dannibear1461Mum, Novice at poetry
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Hold my Hand

by dannibear1461

Hold my hand Take time to understand I wasn't born this way Full of dismay

My life has been one of sorrow Not with words of good morrow I've lost ones I've loved Taken from me from above

Lied to, deceived Just plain grieved My trust just plainly abused My heart has been bruised

I've lost my way Please stay Hold my hand Try to understand

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dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year ago
Wonder

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
8 months ago
Dear Santa ...

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
8 months ago
Touch me...



dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@therinamartins thank you I'm glad it touched you, if we all showed more compassion then then we'd all understand more by finding out about the person and not judging but hey that's just my beliefs , thank you for your comments :)

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
Wow, this is amazing! Just brought tears to my eyes, and I knkw how it goes. People talk and talk but they don't try to understand WHY. When they do, they usually feel ashamed of what they've said. Others just ignore. We're all humans, you know!

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I love couplets and once again thank you for your praise and comments. I was nervous about sharing my work but this community is great to do just that.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
@pluto that's so true in what you've said and perhaps I've forgotten this important essence

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
You done it again. You just drew my heart right out of my chest. The pathos you portrayed took my ethos on a parachuted fall from 30,000 feet. The couplets you've made are effortless for the mind tom perceive. The reader does not have to watch you stretch a rhyming combination for meaning. The structure is so perfect and as I said the with emotion you just took flight to my great appreceiation.

plutoSilver CommaPlanets man
a year agoReply
the people who do hold your hand and try to understand are the ones who matter!