If everyone cared
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If everyone cared

by cheungfio

If everyone loved nobdy lied , wouldn't the world have been

A better place to live in

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone listened to the same music

Wouldn't the world have been a better place I'd everyone didn't die

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone said hello to whoever they found on streets ,in taxis , on buses and in shopping malls

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone prayed to one god , god the almighty

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone had relatives who listened and respected their other relatives ideas

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone stopped being corrupted , using tax payers money rightful

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone prostitution ,child trafficking .

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone was a president and lead their own countries

Wouldn't the world have been a better place if everyone had no access to guns , had no terrorist ideas in their heads , had no connections to the underworld

But why is the world like this ?

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cheungfiolet's try out this too
a year ago
When I think of about future

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a year ago
the creation

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a year ago
NOBODY'S FOOL



bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@cheungfio I have to get the airbags replaced in my truck and entertain grandchildren. After they go to bed I should have time.

cheungfiolet's try out this too
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil am waiting

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I will it make suggestions. It may take a couple of days.

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
@cheungfio why not change the sentence?

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a year agoReply
@tabnash24 not enough space around here

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a year agoReply
@penny hahah you really had to say that too

cheungfiolet's try out this too
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you and probably you'd tell me where exactly the housecleaning is needed

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a year agoReply
@sydney that'd be better

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
if only everybody could live in harmony!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Your message is hampered by the need of proofreading. Your ideas are spectacular. Your verses are well put together. The poem would be much better with some housecleaning.