Hi! :) I haven't published on commaful in a while, and lately I've been writing on my mother language, but here's something small I wrote

This isn't mine (it's Nick Cave's, you can also listen to the song), but i find it so beautiful I had to share it.

I'm a goner.

Stop, look at me.

You forgive, I ask for forgiveness.

The deamons follow me every day; they're unwelcome.

At dinner, my dad said: "We can't go to London, it's too dangerous."

About that girl that resembles porcelain.

I pray for the Tambourine Man. [Based on Bob Dylan's song]

I want to be a bird in the sky and fly.

Everything she says she doesn't like about herself, I love.

She ain't my Lou.

I felt like I was dying.

I wondered what she was made of and I came to no conclusion.

Dont fall in love with a girl of the Sea.

To the friend I lost.

In a sea of nothing.

I asked you to give me your hand.

Everything about her was poetry.