First date
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carmenseguitorrCommunity member
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First date

by CarmenSTorres

We met at 8 pm, at the park's corner, where the rain was falling and it smell to popcorn.

We headed to the cinema. I was cold and you smiled to me to make me feel better.

We had dinner at the museum coffeshop. Was nice to talk with you from all divine and human things.

When you said goodbye, I beg for a kiss, but you couldn't.

You dissapeared. I don't even know when.

In fact, I only had a cinema ticket in my wallet, and I had paid for a single menu.

Unfortunately, you were just in my dreams, too good to be real.

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carmenseguitorrCommunity member
8 months ago
I know that you hide a secret, as everybody does.

carmenseguitorrCommunity member
7 months ago
Like water on the leaves

carmenseguitorrCommunity member
7 months ago
Emotionally yours



7 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you! sometimes, I feel I can write well, because my first language is spanish. I love that you noticed the ambient I wanted to create!

7 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams Thank you! the story has written by itself! I love to suprise my readers! :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
7 months agoReply
This was beautifully descriptive. You could give lessons on setting scenes with sights, smells, sound, and tactility. Your wording was exquisite. Great post!!!!

LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
7 months agoReply
Awwww! I like your story. I thought this was real at first and was sort of sad. Then I was relieved that it was just a dream. Great story!