I'm Trying
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bruvton
bruvton i shall return! soon maybe? no? k nvm
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I'm trying to increase the quality of what I post on Commaful. My last two posts hurt my soul, and this poem isn't good, either.

I'm Trying

My last two works weren't quite up to par.

My last two works weren't quite up to par. No, worse. Double bogey. Way below the bar.

My last two works weren't quite up to par. No, worse. Double bogey. Way below the bar. I'm falling into a hole of no motivation.

My last two works weren't quite up to par. No, worse. Double bogey. Way below the bar. I'm falling into a hole of no motivation. I can't muster up lively words of creation.

My poems are bland and are ugly as sin.

My poems are bland and are ugly as sin. Life is I game, and I don't think I'll win.

My poems are bland and are ugly as sin. Life is I game, and I don't think I'll win. I'm no longer unique, I'm as basic as bleach.

My poems are bland and are ugly as sin. Life is I game, and I don't think I'll win. I'm no longer unique, I'm as basic as bleach. My lack of self-confidence eats at me like a leach.

I'm no longer proud of the things that I do.

I'm no longer proud of the things that I do. I don't want to do my homework that's overdue.

I'm no longer proud of the things that I do. I don't want to do my homework that's overdue. I just rhymed "do" with "due", it's blatant I am struggling.

I'm no longer proud of the things that I do. I don't want to do my homework that's overdue. I just rhymed "do" with "due", it's blatant I am struggling. Here comes a half rhyme. They're gross. Chuckle.

Before I fall further in my own grave,

Before I fall further in my own grave, I promise to do better. I'll work like a slave.

Before I fall further in my own grave, I promise to do better. I'll work like a slave. I'll write stuff worth reading, you just wait.

Before I fall further in my own grave, I promise to do better. I'll work like a slave. I'll write stuff worth reading, you just wait. It may take me a few days, and I might be late.

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